tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36453833.post1774628477142154639..comments2023-11-24T03:48:54.813-05:00Comments on No More Hornets: Five-Seven-FiveThe Exterminatorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14452054124550486048noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36453833.post-50569334174515720982007-11-09T14:10:00.000-05:002007-11-09T14:10:00.000-05:00Pamper? What's this word you talk about?Actually ...Pamper? What's this word you talk about?<BR/><BR/>Actually when I'm sick all I want to do is sleep.. and be cranky. My husband pampers me all the time, so being sick it's no different. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09429263099197981481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36453833.post-68360181630351869452007-11-07T23:05:00.000-05:002007-11-07T23:05:00.000-05:00John-Evo: Notice that there's no possessive pronou...John-Evo: Notice that there's no possessive pronoun in my original haiku. Just "husband" as a Platonic ideal. I suspect that neither you nor I can live up to it. Even Plato, I've heard, was occasionally disappointed in his real-life husband.The Exterminatorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14452054124550486048noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36453833.post-71387245861232307382007-11-07T22:35:00.000-05:002007-11-07T22:35:00.000-05:00"ordinary:While you are ailing,insist husband pamp..."ordinary:<BR/>While you are ailing,<BR/>insist husband pamper you.<BR/>That's what my wife does."<BR/><BR/>Your wife insists that OG's husband pamper her?John Evohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10868904051881865159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36453833.post-7306554290673920942007-11-07T16:05:00.000-05:002007-11-07T16:05:00.000-05:00"I am now callinghaiku moratoriumat No More Hornet...<I>"I am now calling<BR/>haiku moratorium<BR/>at No More Hornets!"</I><BR/><BR/>Good thing since I can't take anymore of this crap in all these comments. I liked the original haikus. Is that the plural form Ex? I have no idea. Wait a minute now, look at what you've done to me. I'm stuck in haiku. I'll get you for this. What the hell is going on? Is it contagious? No-god damn it all! Oh Spartacus on a cross! Damn you to Texas!PhillyChiefhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03355892225956705948noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36453833.post-18761756452302713222007-11-07T14:21:00.000-05:002007-11-07T14:21:00.000-05:00Lynet:Sometimes the finestof mathematicians stillh...<B>Lynet</B>:<BR/>Sometimes the finest<BR/>of mathematicians still<BR/>have trouble counting.<BR/><BR/><B>ordinary</B>:<BR/>While you are ailing,<BR/>insist husband pamper you.<BR/>That's what my wife does.<BR/><BR/>But me, however,<BR/>when I'm sick I'd rather be<BR/>left the fuck alone.<BR/><BR/><B>John-Evo:</B><BR/>I am now calling<BR/>haiku moratorium<BR/>at <I>No More Hornets</I>!The Exterminatorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14452054124550486048noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36453833.post-30318295629439920232007-11-07T14:04:00.000-05:002007-11-07T14:04:00.000-05:00Golden Compass istrying to kill God? well he'dhave...Golden Compass is<BR/>trying to kill God? well he'd<BR/>have to exist firstAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09429263099197981481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36453833.post-10614141968786728662007-11-07T14:02:00.000-05:002007-11-07T14:02:00.000-05:00slow, slow is my workmakes my head nod off -- slee...slow, slow is my work<BR/>makes my head nod off -- sleep, sleep<BR/>need warm bed and tea<BR/><BR/>a flu shot feels like<BR/>being mildly drunk; should I<BR/>call a cab tonight?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09429263099197981481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36453833.post-20242749231026942272007-11-07T11:47:00.000-05:002007-11-07T11:47:00.000-05:00"I'd say that endingWas almost correct -- exceptLe..."I'd say that ending<BR/>Was almost correct -- except<BR/>Leave out the comma."<BR/><BR/>In my new wisdom<BR/>As a author of comma<BR/>Left as enigma.John Evohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10868904051881865159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36453833.post-54882720331091587152007-11-07T03:12:00.000-05:002007-11-07T03:12:00.000-05:00Six syllables, there.Guess I'm not really cut outf...<I>Six</I> syllables, there.<BR/>Guess I'm not really cut out<BR/>for syllabic verse.Lynethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06357023675142716573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36453833.post-14184263632054411462007-11-07T03:09:00.000-05:002007-11-07T03:09:00.000-05:00There's skill, there, in placesbut I'm crazy about...There's skill, there, in places<BR/>but I'm crazy about form<BR/>-- could be a mirageLynethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06357023675142716573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36453833.post-85431811265692451672007-11-07T02:39:00.000-05:002007-11-07T02:39:00.000-05:00Babs:Haiku make you nuts?At least they're not lime...<B>Babs</B>:<BR/>Haiku make you nuts?<BR/>At least they're not limericks.<BR/><I>Those</I> drive me crazy.<BR/><BR/>A Nantucket man<BR/>With a penis enormous.<BR/>He'd suck it for fun.<BR/><BR/><B>John</B>: <BR/>You give me straight lines?<BR/>I try to make funny jokes?<BR/>OK, I have one.<BR/><BR/>End of your haiku,<BR/>This is what you had written: <BR/><I>You see I'm wise, guy.</I> <BR/><BR/>I'd say that ending<BR/>Was almost correct -- except<BR/>Leave out the comma.The Exterminatorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14452054124550486048noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36453833.post-46706824616461172402007-11-07T01:36:00.000-05:002007-11-07T01:36:00.000-05:00"You chugged out a haiku without even realizing it..."You chugged out a haiku without even realizing it. I guess when one grows old enough to attain wisdom, one just thinks in haiku automatically."<BR/><BR/>That's why I like you, Exterminator on net;<BR/>you see I'm wise, guy.John Evohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10868904051881865159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36453833.post-33552434591390488252007-11-06T20:53:00.000-05:002007-11-06T20:53:00.000-05:00Fabulous haiku.Atheistic words from theExterminato...Fabulous haiku.<BR/>Atheistic words from the<BR/>Exterminator. <BR/><BR/>Jesus Christ how I<BR/>detest all of this counting.<BR/>It makes my head ache. <BR/><BR/>Can I finish now? <BR/>Before something horrific<BR/>happens in my brain? <BR/><BR/>I don't think I can. <BR/>It's like some sick addiction. <BR/>Heroin haiku.Babs Gladhandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05120612577936100239noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36453833.post-64099778766633011892007-11-06T17:14:00.000-05:002007-11-06T17:14:00.000-05:00Haiku...wasn't that the overthrow of the gov't of ...Haiku...wasn't that the overthrow of the gov't of Nepal? Or was that a high coup?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36453833.post-80999291848632020982007-11-06T14:15:00.000-05:002007-11-06T14:15:00.000-05:00John-Evo, you said:I don't know haiku,So I won't b...John-Evo, you said:<BR/><BR/><I>I don't know haiku,<BR/>So I won't bother to try.<BR/>LOOKS like you did good!</I><BR/><BR/>There, but for the deletion of two unnecessary words, is exactly what you wrote. You chugged out a haiku without even realizing it. I guess when one grows old enough to attain wisdom, one just thinks in haiku automatically.The Exterminatorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14452054124550486048noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36453833.post-43066357243324497772007-11-06T14:05:00.000-05:002007-11-06T14:05:00.000-05:00I don't know Haiku, so I won't bother to try. But...I don't know Haiku, so I won't bother to try. But it LOOKS like you did good!John Evohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10868904051881865159noreply@blogger.com